Today’s challenge was either fanfiction or altered history.
I wouldn’t be shocked if this was the hardest choice all week in terms of prompts.
I’m sort of a history nut. Actually, History is a degree I’m considering when I go to college (2 1/4 more years…!). As a result, I’ve managed to get a conglomeration of events that I’m interested in. Oddly, there’s really no theme to what I like. From Joan of Arc (what this drabble is based on) to the Battle of Britain, my interests are far and wide. The only stable similarity is that most of my interest lies in Europe, since so much went on in that area of the world.
There’s a problem, though. I’m not just a history maniac. I’m also a strong devotee to the use of fanfiction as a tool for learning writing. Like I said before, I really hope to write a more detailed post about it soon, but I think fanfiction is just amazing for young writers (read: new writers). You have characters with fully-formed personalities, you have a setting, and you have a loose basis of plot. All you need to do is add some kind of minor conflict and conclude how the characters will react. When I wrote my series Akatsuki Lives a year and a half ago, the only twist I added was an addition of two characters, one my own and the other my friend’s. For such a small change, I cranked out thirty chapters of it, and my writing improved immensely.
I don’t have time to go on about the mercies of fanfiction, nor do I have time to rant about my fascination with precedents. All of that can be saved for another post! But for now, I think I can give some basic background notes on what the drabble is about.
This drabble talks about Joan of Arc and the “last moments” of her life. Story goes that she was born in France and around thirteen years old, she started hearing the voice of God and some other saints. As a result, she eventually became a soldier and led the French Army against the English, taking back Paris and some other cities. However, she was eventually captured and put on trial for witchcraft, which she was found guilty for. She was burned at the stake for her “crimes” and her remains strewn in the Seinne, and it wasn’t until years later that the Pope renounced her sentence. She is now the patron saint of France.
This drabble goes into what might have happened to make her live. Unfortunately, I was pressed for time and didn’t have the ability to get more detailed sources for this. However, I did put in what I remember from my own research, and I hope you still enjoy it!
Word Count: 1,040
Story written by Tamera Janneff. Do not copy, reproduce, or claim work as your own for monetary or any other reasons. I’m okay with reblogging, though. *smile*
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She was terrified of what was to come.
Joan would not say it out loud, however, and reveal her fear to the gathering mass before her. She stood as proud as she could whilst tied to the stake, her chin held high and her brown eyes showing nothing but calm. She knew what the people would be thinking, a mixture of Why are we killing a savior and Destroy the witch, but she couldn’t acknowledge either thought and give them basis. No matter what she had done forFrance, no matter what she had done to liberateParis and save the exiled king, she knew it was her time to die.
Even so, she had to steel her jaw tight to keep from crying out, because she did not want this fate.
“Witch!” a voice called below her, off of the platform. Joan slowly looked down to the priest, who held a wooden cross in his arms, staring at her with malicious eyes. She recognized him, because he was one of the ones that was for this madness. She could not bring herself to hate him, however. She couldn’t hate anybody in the face of God.
“Witch,” the priest continued with a sneer. “As your final wish, we of the Church have acknowledged your right to plead to the cross, to allow one last prayer to grace your lips before your burning. Do you continue to accept this wish?”
“I do,” her voice rang out proudly, and in moments, the crowd was silenced.
The priest slowly walked up the stairs to the platform where she stood, holding the cross before him as if it would protect him from her presence. Joan continued to watch him as he knelt, holding the cross up to her, close enough that she may see the grainlines and scratches embedded into the dark wood.
She closed her eyes and whispered her prayer, and in the silence of the crowd, she heard it ringing.
“Oh God,” she started, “May you bless the people ofFrance, for they have fought bravely. May you bless the soldiers and forgive them, for they have done naught wrong but fight for their country. May you bless the peasants and forgive them, for they have defended themselves for their food and children. May you bless the people of the Church and forgive them, for while they have falsely condemned me to death-“
“Pardon?!” the priest stood and pulls the cross away, glaring at her. “Falsely condemned?! You were called a witch before all, and none denied it. Can you call that false?!”
“I merely say the words to God that He Himself has proven to me,” she replied calmly. “And for this lapse, I pray that He does not punish my nay-sayers – especially you, who have brought me this final wish, the cross, which I may pray to him through-“
“Enough!”
A searing hand slapped her, and Joan was forced to look to her right as her face turned from the shock. She gasped, eyes wide, cheek stinging. She wouldn’t look at the man – couldn’t, for the tears had started to well.
It would be over soon, no matter how she hated it to be.
“You are a witch!” he cried, pointing a finger at her. “You are a witch, condemned by the loyal Church of England, and all you speak are lies! Be gone! The prayers you speak are nothing but lies, sorcery meant to trick the weak and fool the old! May your death be slow and-“
He stopped, and for the moment, Joan could not conceive why. For long moments, she thought of nothing, thinking that his silence was imaginary-
-before she heard the building shock of the crowd.
The people started to push forward, slowly at first, but steadily. The priest turned to them, looking around at them all, as they started towards the platform. Joan herself looked from side to side, staring at these people who she had fought for, who were now fighting for her.
Words could not describe what had started to well in her heart, as well as in her eyes.
Suddenly, the tension broke. The crowd pushed forward with shouts, people storming up the stairs and onto the platform. The priest shouted and stumbled back, looking to the men behind her that Joan could not see. From what she could gather, there was nothing they could do – men started to shout to each other as peasants held the offenders back, all eyes on her.
“B-Back, slaves!” the priest cried, holding the cross before his body as he faced the oncoming crowd, now feet from Joan. “Be gone, or else God will lay on you His judgment-“
It looked like he was sucked into the angry crowd, and in moments his shouting peaked and went silent. Joan stared at the people, knees starting to go weak from shock, for while she once had the strength to stand, malnutrition from her time in imprisonment made power seep from her bones.
It started to pass in a blur, from the moments that the ropes around her body were cut away. She immediately stumbled, and she felt herself being surrounded by warm arms. She was taken off the stage – she knew that, for she could feel her bare feet against soil. When she could look up, Joan could see the people leading her to a horse, with a mounted soldier upon it.
“We have been waiting for you, Joan of Arc,” the soldier said, holding down his hand to her. “We will take you to safety, Saint of France.”
She placed her hand in his, and onto the horse she was lifted, behind the soldier. Joan looked down at the peasants, who looked at her with admiration, despite the fact that they had just saved her life.
Joan smiled and spoke as strongly as she could. “For saving me, I thank you. And let God bless all of thee here today.”
The people cheered, their voices breaking through her mind as she started to drift into sleep. As the horse leapt into a gallop and she fell into sleep, she heard a single voice speak, proud.
“Thank you, God, for we have saved a saint today.”